Hello,I’m Ye Zhimin. I graduated from South China North University and majored in financial management. With a special interest in advertisement industry, I have successfully completed more than 60 credit hours in courses related to selling, including marketing、business communication. I also have worked in Adam Advertising agency as my internship program and I was responsible for assisting the advertisement seller to design the advertisement. In addition, I’m skilled at communicating with others and computer software. I would appreciate the opportunity to work for the Internet giant.
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