Hello, I'm Irene, a graduate of SCNU majoring in financial management. People say that I am a cheerful and easy-going person. During my college life, I learned marketing and advertising courses, which helped me master advertising marketing skills. Taking part in many social activities has cultivated my excellent communication skill and strain capacity. Besides, with a high passion for sales work, I once had an internship in sales and was praised by the leader for my outstanding performance, which helped me master certain sales experience. So I think I am competent for your job. Please give me a chance. Thank you.
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